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Broke free from wolf pack...
Lonesome eves captivating
Tundra escapades
Lonesome eves captivating
Tundra escapades
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Anonymity
Confusion.
Forgotten access
memories of another person
another year
another moment
in time.
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Absence
there is snow all around
and we have invited you in
but silence falls like night
and the winds carry no sound
I remember; it was by the river
when you carried me on your shoulders
I covered your eyes with my hands
and there was laughter
It was in the woods, I remember
you taught me to ski
it was getting dark already
and there was still a long way to go
and yet there was no rush
and we talked about the stars
I remember; It was by the sea
already after everything changed
on a cold day still full of joy
when we were all brought together;
there were few words, even then
but we could still see the shine
and the pride in your eyes
as I took h
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notesleep
playing my emphases like harp strings
your voice smokes thru the oaken bramble
pour a carbonated apology, a sun-stained
mile marked envelope, two ill-fitted birds,
hands small holes right before a rush of river
what it feels like being swallowed from the outside
crushing rings into truth serum, pretend
to be out of tune with that deception
I have been unable to parse my own persona
a pink cotton voice I remember thru the phone
I remember because it formed me into a granary
one crop after another of patriarchal idioms
whisper my secrets so softly into a glint of red hair
a saucer-eyed lace pattern cut into pine paper
I practice radical self lo
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First original poem for my poetry class. It's also kinda personal. But it wouldn't exist if I hadn't decided to take this class. I haven't really been in the mood to write lately. Or read. So I've been really inactive on here. Sorry guys, I'll make it up to you soon. Tell me what you think of my new haiku. I think haiku's are my weak spot even though I like what I've written. I can't help but think it could be better. My last one was pretty but the meaning flew over everyones head. But I prefer my poetry to be personal and profound when possible. It's difficult to write in a style that prefers simplicity even though simplicity can be so beautiful. Sometimes I think I go overboard but I still never feel like I've gone deep enough. What do you guys think? Just a little confused on my writing lately.
Regardless, I hope you enjoy the poem and I hope it makes you think even if you know not what about.
Regardless, I hope you enjoy the poem and I hope it makes you think even if you know not what about.
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This one is good! I don't really like haiku's personally... I prefer longer narratives over short concise imagery. In fact I don't like to stick to any particular style... too constraining. Just my opinion though! Thank you for sharing 