literature

10/3/2014

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Gentle, in cupped hands

    Velvet orb of lush forests

         My guide to the gods
I've never written a haiku before. I've also never written a poem in my sleep before. This was an interesting one, it came to me in a dream. I always wanted to say that about something. I'm not sure it fits entirely with haiku tradition, but I hope you enjoy it anyways.
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ChasMandala's avatar
Awesome haiku - especially for a first time out. Remember to follow your dreams! I can just visualize that green sphere in your hands, guiding you to a higher plane... :clap: